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Mar 26, 2016 8:17:49 GMT -5
This isn't a bad start at all, I am a fan of the squares.
I would give a bit more attention/width to the icons on the board (ice cream ones), they seem to be the big drawing point to the board.
I'm not sure how I feel about the dark box behind them, I didn't NOT like it at first but the more I look the more I wonder what its there for.... maybe with a few more applications of it it will start to make sense.
Thanks for inspiring me ❤
Mar 26, 2016 12:40:16 GMT -5
Honestly, I was just fooling around with the squares and I guess i forgot to remove them. Might of been my failed attempt of being artsy lol. How do you feel about the on/off icons? What design changes do you think I should make?
And it goes both ways. You inspire me a ton. ❤
sorry mister West is gone
Mar 28, 2016 8:54:50 GMT -5
banner white needs a texture
maybe like lines/simple geometric pattern or noise
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Apr 7, 2016 18:13:16 GMT -5
Getting nicer!
I don't think the random text is necessary, it's a little distracting unless its supposed to be the first thing read.
I'm still confused by the icecream icons, I want them to have a bit more space on either side and fit in nicer. Maybe try without the background, invert the colors. So it matches the main dynamo logo?
Apr 7, 2016 19:30:45 GMT -5
I had to put the icons inside the board because I needed more room to put the third side bar (i still need to work on it).And changed the BG because client said it was too distracting (I agree)
Yeah I inverted the colors for the one of the icons and it looks kinda weird. What do you think?
puu.sh/oa7P8/b09f1d27a3.jpgThanks for the critique btw.
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Apr 7, 2016 19:45:22 GMT -5
Hmm, I do like the parallel between the new icon and the logo... but I was thinking more that the icon would be yellow instead of a yellow outline. (Like the logo).
But yes, something is still off. I'd try to give the board icon a tad more room, maybe give it a perfect square instead of a rectangle.
Also, how would search work? Does that expand to the field?