Jul 14, 2014 12:22:55 GMT -5
I've been working on this for about two weeks -- it's a site for a local company that sells bath and body products through home parties. Not particularly confident about it... Any suggestions?
i.imgur.com/gT7AnYK.jpgThe current website:
www.bathologie.com/
Jul 14, 2014 15:02:11 GMT -5
First impressions:
- The second menu seems a bit misplaced/awkward/out of place. The border between it and the top header also seems off...
- The three boxes under "Host a blending bar" also seem out of place.
- Weird rectangle button borders...
- I like the teal color.
sorry mister West is gone
Jul 17, 2014 6:57:24 GMT -5
Looks nice, but kinda generic design? But for the purpose it's good. Needs more (solid) colors though. Teal is nice and the beige is nice but throw in some more fire-y colors to spice it up. Or green/purple to keep it more subtle/calm, I guess thats what they want.
elli
Jul 18, 2014 5:00:48 GMT -5
It looks nice, but I have to agree with corez: it looks and feels like any random bootstrap template out there
Jul 21, 2014 10:52:23 GMT -5
I can't do much for colors since I can't deviate from their brand, which is the teal, dark blue and tan -- but yes, it's generic. She's only giving me 8 weeks to get it done, so I had to base it on something I could code quickly. More solid colors would do well, though.
Thanks, guys
Jul 27, 2014 18:04:42 GMT -5
All right, I've revised it a bit. More solid colors, standardized the heading sizes, and tweaked the spacing throughout.
i.imgur.com/HzqLKoH.jpg"Featured products" is a bit of a clusterf~~k -- she didn't want to show everyday pricing on the main page, but still wanted products showcased. Any suggestions how to clean this bit up? I think it's the photos that throw it off
Jul 27, 2014 18:47:10 GMT -5
What if you did full images of the jars and hover effects. Or the caption under the jars to space out the layout more. Seems a bit cramp in that area.
sorry mister West is gone
Jul 28, 2014 6:16:08 GMT -5
Make the edges on top and right airbrushy? Or feathery? You know what I mean? Looks to straight there
I beg to remain, Sir, your most humble and obedient servant,
Corez
Aug 2, 2014 14:55:15 GMT -5
Thanks for the help, guys. 'Preciate ya! The full images seem to work best for the featured product area. I changed the marquee a little in an alternate version -- comparisons?
Current version:
i.imgur.com/n3LYroI.jpgAlt version:
i.imgur.com/OiZ0Ck5.jpg
sorry mister West is gone
Aug 2, 2014 15:41:28 GMT -5
the contact us text @ bottom and mailing list text might be hard to read on computers, white blends too much
other than that looks great
i expect at least 5-10% of what you make btw
sorry mister West is gone
Aug 2, 2014 15:42:31 GMT -5
the alt sucks, too monotone (only difference is middle img right)
sorry mister West is gone
Sept 3, 2014 9:57:43 GMT -5
you@email text is hard to read
i dont like the cyan table or whatever for the grapefruit part, id change the color tbh, maybe make it darker or totally different one
how much time do you get to work on this anyway